2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I will take my foreign friend to White Lake it is most interesting place in my heart. The White Lake in the east of China.There is a peaceful and quite place and everyone are kind . In White Lake,we can take a boat to the heart of the lake. Afterward we can enjoy whistle and sunshine,It is so comfortable.what's more,we can go to the island in the heart of lake.we can BBQ or camp in the island, In the end,i do hope my foreign friend can visit my city.I will take him enjoy a special time.