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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36983[网页划词已开启]
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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In choosing a friend, one should be very careful. A good friend is as valuable as a precious stone. He can help you study. You can have fun together and she is a genius in understanding and tolerant others, and as a friend, she is honest and reliable. Above all else, I look for understanding in a friend. As good friend, she always understands what another person is feeling. She is not quick to judge, instead, she tries to think of ways to be helpful. Further more, she is also a good listener. Of course, I’m one of “the others”. At the same time, however, she is a honest friend. She doesn’t look for faults in me. But she does not ignore them either, she once said to me that she would rather focus on my good points. In short, she can understand me and accept me mostly. As a good friend, she is also reliable. I can always depend on her, especially during the days when I prepared for my graduate acceptance test last year. And, if she tells me somewhere at a certain tine, I can be sure she well be there. If I need a favor she’ll do her best to help me. If I am in trouble, she’ll not desert me. So when you meet someone who is reliable, honest, and understanding, I’ll tell you that you have found a good friend.

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