语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题;文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但有个别拼写错误。
in the modlle socient most studend not attach the English spelling in usual life study , face to this situation we have ability to finding cause .thought the call at almost student we was know they are not attach spelling just that most time all the communication and daily talk about ,and add to some words spelling is to hard and to long ,so that them day and day change that not attach it . in order to transform this phenomenon in my opinion the frist to improve student pronunciation because it is more same in spelling