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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12876
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分51.0分
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结构良好,但是语言不流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视。

用户练习作文:

the picture show that peraents are writing an e-mile with computer and will it to their child ,whose name is Andy.the father are writing and the mother are looking at it. under the picture ,there are some words on our eyes what is the peraents want to talk with their child,it shows that"Dear Andy--How are you?Your mother and i are fine.We both miss you and hope you are doing well.We look forward to seeing you again the nexttime your compter crasges and you come downstairs for something to eat.Love ,Mon and Dad."

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