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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦52:假期生活

发布时间:2014-09-30 15:34浏览次数:521
要求:
如今中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明.美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期
生活。请写封回信。要点如下:
学习和休闲仍然重要;
帮忙做家务或干农活;
参加社会活动.做志愿者工作.帮助他人。
注意:
1.词数80一100;
2.请结合实际增加细节.适当发挥;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好.不计入总词数。

参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者


Dear Lisa.
I'm glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot.


Best wishes !

Yours.

Li Ming

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

The further development of economy in China has brought the more entertainment and leisure to people’s life. A case in point is the long holiday such as the National Day, in which people can spend one week or so enjoying themselves in different ways, especially going shopping and traveling. It has been agreed that the long holiday may bring much more benefit to both the customer and the businessmen. On the other hand, however, the long holiday also brings much expectable problems to the society. First, too many visitors in the long holidays have caused the strain in traffic. Second, the visitors like to go to the well-known interesting places, which may lead to the serious damage to the nature and the scene. In my view, people need such long holidays, and what really matters is how to guide people in their entertainment. For example, it is advisable that people try to avoid going shopping or traveling in the rush days. Anyway, the long holiday is a good idea of satisfying both the people and the merchants.

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