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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦52:假期生活

发布时间:2014-09-30 15:34浏览次数:524
要求:
如今中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明.美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期
生活。请写封回信。要点如下:
学习和休闲仍然重要;
帮忙做家务或干农活;
参加社会活动.做志愿者工作.帮助他人。
注意:
1.词数80一100;
2.请结合实际增加细节.适当发挥;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好.不计入总词数。

参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者


Dear Lisa.
I'm glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot.


Best wishes !

Yours.

Li Ming

用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Generally speaking, long holidays are good for us college students. On the one hand, we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weaknesse and further develop strengths. On the other hand, we can take part-time jobs, which can make us realize responsibility and make ourselves better prepared for social life. But every coin has two sides. Some students fail to make good use of their time and they are addicted to various computer games. I am afraid that they are likely to ruin themselves in this way. As far as I am concerned, I will try to make the best use of my precious time. I will spend most of my holidays studying English for that I am very poor at it. In addition. I will take a part-time job as private teacher. By this means. I can earn some money and put my knowledge into practice as well.

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