参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者
Best wishes !
Yours.
Li Ming
错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅。
Generally speaking, long holidays are good for us college students. On the one hand, we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weaknesse and further develop strengths. On the other hand, we can take part-time jobs, which can make us realize responsibility and make ourselves better prepared for social life. But every coin has two sides. Some students fail to make good use of their time and they are addicted to various computer games. I am afraid that they are likely to ruin themselves in this way. As far as I am concerned, I will try to make the best use of my precious time. I will spend most of my holidays studying English for that I am very poor at it. In addition. I will take a part-time job as private teacher. By this means. I can earn some money and put my knowledge into practice as well.