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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦52:假期生活

发布时间:2014-09-30 15:34浏览次数:521
要求:
如今中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明.美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期
生活。请写封回信。要点如下:
学习和休闲仍然重要;
帮忙做家务或干农活;
参加社会活动.做志愿者工作.帮助他人。
注意:
1.词数80一100;
2.请结合实际增加细节.适当发挥;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好.不计入总词数。

参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者


Dear Lisa.
I'm glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot.


Best wishes !

Yours.

Li Ming

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但要注意减少拼写错误;文中衔接词丰富;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少。

用户练习作文:

According to a survey,in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise.Many college students have no concept of thrift in their mind.They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society.This extravagant spending is primarily caused by the following factors. First of all,nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families.They arethe apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money.In addition, withthe improvement of living standards,parents can afford higher expenditure of their children.Moreover,some students like to pursue fashion and trends,which tend to need more money.Finally,campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending. From my point of view,a college student,as a pure consumer,should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardlessof their prices.The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our futuredevelopment.

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