2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,more and more people like online shopping.because it makes people life more convenience than before.However,it is bring unexpected problem. With the development of the economy,internet has entered the people's life.The The most of young man and office workers like online shopping because that save money. but it lead to many people depend on online shopping.for example,someone who buy cheap technology products spend 1 hours or more than 1 hours on online shopping. In my opinion,Appropriate online shopping is good,but if people depend on online shopping,it makes people lazy and dull.