作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强。
Something Of My Hometown I am so happy hearing that you will come and visit our hometown,my friend.Now,let me inturduce some interesting places of our hometow for you,and i think it will help you to know this beautiful town. Our hometown is seating the south of china,which named is wulizhen town,and was found in Ming Dynasty,her age is more than 400 years.