2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,more and more people like online shopping.because it makes life of people more convenience than before.However,it is brought unexpected problem. With the development of the economy,internet has entered people's life.The The most of young man and office workers like online shopping, because online shopping save their money.but it makes many people depend on online shopping.for example,someone who buy cheap products spend 1 hours or more than 1 hours on online shopping. In my opinion,Appropriate online shopping is good,but if people depend on online shopping,it makeslazy and dull.