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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to judge a person, what is your standard for it? Someone may judge a person simply by their appearance, but it is unwise. On the one hand, individuals ability is always unequal to their their appearance, as we all know, the appearance of people is related to the gene of their family, but the capacity of individuals is developed by their efforts in social environment. On the other hand, judging a person by appearance is a prejudice, it is unrespected for strangers. Most importantly, the quality of soul is more important than a great appearance. As soon as I'm concerned, when we link relation to others, we must consider their virtues first, then, we need deeply know them, understand their live environment, study experience and their hobbies. In the end, we should more focus on the fundamantal ability of the individuals. After all, ability is to us what water is to fish,we neend to improve ourselves rather than over emphasize the appearance.

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