高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；文中从句过少；文章能较灵活使用词汇，高级词汇有些少，还需注意个别拼写错误。

My hometown had greet changed. But we should pay attention to bad side. In the past, my hometown was surrounded by green trees. The fishes played with each other in the fresh river. The houses were simple and the streets were thin. And the most importent, people's life was poor and simple. But now , the tall buildings are built up, big and small cars are drived in every roads. But, because of the development of my hometown, the environment is changing worse and worse. The number of trees is less and less and fishes disappeared. The environment is very importment . We must solve the problem at once.