小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

文中用词灵活多样，但要注意增加使用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。

On the sunday we went out on a trip where was a mountain near the city a day that that day was my birthday. After breakfast, father drove us to the mountain. Many people already were climbing when we were got at the foot of the hill. We had carried ourselves bag on our back then we set out for the hills. In the beginning, i felt very light that my bag, so i climbed it faster than my parents and my brothers. When we had been reached halfway up the hill, i felt tired more than that i felt my legs were very hurt and found the bag became heavier. I said to my mother that i didn't wanted to go on, but my mother not agreed, and she said to me that" if you stopped it, you will haven't a trip any more", i cannot but went on it, because i didn't lost the trip forever. When the last, I felt can't breathe and the body hurt all over when we reached the top of the hill. Although i felt very tired at last, but i was still happy and i understand that " as long as you don't give up , you will reach the finish line"