高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写做的很好；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。

my hometown is located in the northernmost province of the china.it's called to heilongjiang. i have always lived there since my birth.when i was a child,i usually saw the blue sky and rich sunlight.in the spring,there are many kinds of trees on both sides of the river,it colourful and fantastic.in hot summer,many swimmers can jump into the water and go swimming.the people can't afford to buy a house because their earn less.many years later,my hometown have a big change .there are a lot of tall buildings among main streets of city.almost each family can buy one or two cars and heavily traffic jam is caused by it.some factories are built in suburb,while factories bring some boring problems,for example,may be the developing industry make our environmental degradation.the air pollution make some trees reduce and fishes disappear.