从句使用不熟练,注意在平时练习中多加积累;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
I have a friend. Her name is Lisa and she is tall . She is 12 years old. She likes dr awing, swimming and singing. She likes eating ice cream, chips, fish, meat, chicken and rice. Her Mum is a doctor and her Dad is a worker. She has two cousins , one is big brother and another is little sister(3 months less than her). I often play game with her on weekend.