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WITH MY FRIEND Today my good friend LiMing come to my hometown I'm very happy and I will plan to take he visit my hometown.In my momtern he is the first foreign friend come to my hometown so I am very.I hope to msde he have a good mood in my homwtown. First I will take he to go to The Great Wall becase this is a very great building in the word and if you leave the earth you also see it in the speace.scend he will very want to YuNan this is a big beautiful place ,at their the flowers will always fall down .And have many people go to their ever year so he must be very like YunNan.Third we will my home at my home we will have a good sleep and this made he more know my life. I like friend and I will make he have a good momery .And I will go to he country in the after day.
