小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I have a good friend. She is twelve years old. Her name is Lily. And her hair is long and black, her eyes is big and bling. She looks very lovely, and she is very friendly to me. We often play games together, and we have a good time. I hope we can make good friends forever.