采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒。
The past years witnessed a great social problem that people are easy losing themselves by exposed various information from different media ways. By the survey,we have to acknowledge the trust that high technology provides convince to us to know the constantly news and other information and data. However, a wealth of information make it's difficult for people to identify which one is trust and which one is lies.For instance,there are many companies write beautiful and impressive sorties in newspapers or radios to motivate readers and audiences to buy their product whose qualities are bad. Some measures must be taken before situation become worse. To begin with,the government should draft legislation to limit some unofficial companies and avoid bad information attend in medias. Moreover,reinforcing our right consciousness is a key to protect ourselves. Only these measures be taken can we divide the information that is real useful.