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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5735
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒。

用户练习作文:

The past years witnessed a great social problem that people are easy losing themselves by exposed various information from different media ways. By the survey,we have to acknowledge the trust that high technology provides convince to us to know the constantly news and other information and data. However, a wealth of information make it's difficult for people to identify which one is trust and which one is lies.For instance,there are many companies write beautiful and impressive sorties in newspapers or radios to motivate readers and audiences to buy their product whose qualities are bad. Some measures must be taken before situation become worse. To begin with,the government should draft legislation to limit some unofficial companies and avoid bad information attend in medias. Moreover,reinforcing our right consciousness is a key to protect ourselves. Only these measures be taken can we divide the information that is real useful.

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