托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

some people said "we should keep on learning for the degree,because we are just little older",but some others said"we should enjoy our time for life,just no need to learn more",for me ,i prefer to agree the first point,i will get some point to support my statement. once upon a time, when we were children,we'd been told we should be a good student for learning more and more at the school.we all did,i think we learned the math ,technology,and so on for a degree and a good job. and a few years later,we grow up to be a adult,and get a job,maybe for our family ,our kids,our parents,our apartments ,we must make money,make enough money for the cost,so then,if the learning exists in my life,if we can learn something we like .i don't know,we have less and less time to study,but we should just make money without learning? i don't think so. for example,me. In work time,i work so so hard to finish my work,and try my best to get some chances to learn something about jobs.the office software ,the English ,the korea.and so on.after work,i keep fit,i want to make myself more and more stronger.all that can make me full of life,i feel that. so if you have many time but doing nothing,just learning,that can make you feel you can do better for futher,trust me.