高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；高级词汇使用贫乏，注意一下个别拼写错误。

My hometown is a small town,in the past,it was surrounded with many trees;the water in the creek was clear,fish were playing in it;the house was simple and the street was very narrow;people worked hard and their life was poor.Now,at my hometown,many high building are built,factories are here and there;you can see all kinds of cars in the street;but with the development of the industury,the enviroment are becoming worse and worse,trees are less than before,as far the fish in the creek,ther have been gone;for the beautiful future,we must prevent the pollution to the enviorment.