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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71640
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇使用熟练,但拼写错误要注意;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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    Modest or ambition is a controversial topic which has aroused heated discussions in the pubic. Opinion on this matter vary from person to person.     Some hold the positive view, they claim that modest maybe aroused mistake when people was discussion or commicate, because everyone has different culture and life experience, when american talk with chinese, modest will arouse misunderstand. Ambition will make you more progress, you can find better job and life. On the contrary,may not agree,they emphaise that modest make you have better relationship in our social. Ambition always connect with agreesive.      Personally speaking, iperfer to agree with the latter opinion. Ambition is very important, but we cannot without modest,because in this social modest is to life what the foundation is to a skyscraper. Only in this way can lead a healthy of life.

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