1999年专四作文真题:电视广告的优缺点

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In my opinion ,i think that TV advertising bring as benefits .because always and keep on long time watch TV will make you eye be tired and no more time to doing some other thing .somes advertising canmake you have time to put some one or drinking the water eat some food .anything if you do .so that the advertising can shitf our think-ing such that if you donot it benefit it will be always hardful on our life .