题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文中从句数量不足;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。
With the rapid development of the world and the science technology,computers are playing an increasing part in our daily life.People can do a great number of things with computers. To start with,people can go shopping on the internet with the help of computers.In the second place,we can get a lot of useful messages on line,which will be good for our study. What's more,wokan book the trick on the internet without leaving our home.Last but not least,we even can have class withthe help of computers. However, every coin have two side,no exceptions of the computer.Some people addicated to computer games,which is bad for our health and our study. From what have been discussed above,we can drow a conclution that computers are of great importance for our human beings ,but we should use it in a probably way.