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Dear Tom, I heard of a good news that you opened the internet shop of your owns successfully.First I give my congraduation about it ,and then I hope you can do me a favor. I had made a great variety of chinese knots which I want to sell in the your internet shop. The chinese knot which made from red silk by myself is the traditional man-made decoration which can be hanged up on the wall of the house. They have all different sizes fixing the different requirements. They represent happyness,homony and stability.They have different price from 5 to 50 dollors according the different sizes. Finally I will send some samples of the chinese knot to you , You can try to sell them on the shop. Best regards, Li Hua