雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

注意句与句，段与段之间的衔接；句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；希望作者高级词汇的使用能更熟练，单词拼写要更认真。

nowadays, most people can offord to trival to abroad. there are two sides of effects about this. firtstly, trival to other country can learn different things, such as languages and culture. meanwhile, poeple trival to other country will bring more work opportunity for poeple, such as tourist guide and trival servece company. on the other hand, people spend money to other country means reduce economy and riased economy for other. the point is, if people only go trival and spend money and learn nothing, i don't think it's a worth thing to do. but people can learn more up-date things and enrich mind. in a word, trival to other country not a absolutely good or bad thing to say.