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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Dear, How are you! This is a sincere saler Hubin and i knew about your product from the fair of New Yourk on 15th Dec. I'm realy interst in your new product No 5670, would please kindly offer a price list and instruction of your new item to me? I will appreciate about this. I sale this kinds of cargo for many years, i have a huge confidence i can make your new item be the next hot seller if you give me this chance. I really wan to estabish business relationship with your company. Waiting for your reply. your's sincere Hubin
