文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
With the micro-blog and Weixin prevailing among people in all ages,the interpersonal communication through the internet seems to take the place of our communication in real life,as people tend to chat through iphones or ipads even though they are in the same room.Therefore,people start to pay more attention to the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication,as well as me.As far as I am concerned,there are advantages as well as disadvantage. First,the internet is helping interpersonal communication get more broader,by which People can extend their relationship internet conveniently. Second,the internet can shorten the time of communication.Rather than waiting a long time for a letter,we can connect to a friend in the other side of the earth in no more than one minute. However,every coin has two sides, so dose the communication through the internet.The internet may influence the depth of our communication.We talk much through the QQ,but little true feeling have we expressed to our friends.Maybe there is two reasons.First of all,our emotions are so complicated that we can't express them by words.What's more,the emotional communication can only happen when we talking face to face,with eye contact.
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