小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少。

I favourite teacher that she was my English teacher when i was in middle school. When i entered the campus on the first day, some books fall the round from my hands because when i was small and had great many things on my hands. No body helped me when it happend, but she walked toward to me and went down that picked up the books on the floor, and gave them back to me. I was so that forgot said "thanks" to her when i was cleaning up things very serious by my hands. I finded she was my English teacher by the English course tow day later. She said hello what she had nodded to me, but i figured out who she was woman helped to me that day. Now, she had taught the English to me again, was it called fate?