有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。
I favourite teacher who she had taught English to me when i had studied in middle school. When i entered the campus on the first day, some books fell the round from my hands because when i was small and had great many things on my hands. Nobody helped me when it happened, but she walked toward to me and went down that picked up the books on the floor, and gave them back to me. I had so that forgot said "thanks" to her when i was cleaned up things very serious by my hands. I found she was my English teacher by the English course tow day later. She said hello what she had nodded to me, but i figured out who she was woman that helped to me that day. Now, she taught the English to me again, was this fate?