雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇基本功很好，单词拼写检查要更加认真。

There were always such news which is about some young girl got pregment, and obviously parts of them are not ready to be a parent. so ,since that I personally agree with the idea of opening up some lessons to teach those how to be really parents. Being parents that means resbosibility. Babies are not a simply toy, you can not abandon or abuse it. these days there were lots news that saying about some couples abandoned their babies, or some instance like an teanger got pregement. It's irresponsible and should be condemned by the whole society. the first thing to being a parent should be mature and take one's duty. what's more? take some yong couples for example, they were educated for decades, most of them like everything in control, apprently ,baby is an exception. many young coulples don't know how to take care of their babies, and due to some reasons, they feel ashame to consult with others, that might led some dangerous. for instance, wrong way to feed an infant could cause chokes or something else to those fragent babies. many of them turn their way to seek help through internet which might help but not systemic. Education is another problem, bring up a baby is not simpally provide it with food. according to analyse, the age 3 to 5that is regared as the very mportant stage for a person to establish his personality and interesting to words , since that ,as parents they should choice a wright and scientific way to educate they children which is obvisous abscent for large part of the parents All in all , it's necessary to provide some lessons ,It could be involed some dissucitions, in this way a hopeful future can be expected.