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when it is comes to a beautiful city in china .people's options in this question vary form person to person.many people may choose beijing or shanghai.as for me ,i prefer to stay in chengdu ,which i am used to eat taste foods and enjoy beautiful scenery in chengdu .chengdu is a beautiful and interesting city in my heart and i will take my foreign to eat food and enjoy scenery if him fly to chengdu. the reasons of option are as follows.for one thing,chengdu has a number of taste foods everywhere such an extent that we always feel chengdu is a symbol of foods .in chengdu foods culture,food stands for hapiness and confidence.for another,chengdu is the capital of shu country in history which has many significant places.for hundreds years,peopel would like come to chengdu in order to enjoy baeautiful scenery which makes everyone in high spirits.so i willing to take my friends visit chengdu!
