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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9027
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文章组织结构良好;虽然文中能够较丰富地使用高级词汇,文章用词太过单一。

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I suppose life is a maze.Sometimes we don't know what we live for everyday,but,definitely,meaningful life is based on how we use it,what our concept of it is,and what we design it for,etc.However,i don't define it as the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.Cause there was a saying,things change,roll with the pounches.So we don't know ,to some extent,what will outlast it.

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