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nowdays,many parents tend to help their own chlidren such an extent that don't make them do anything.it is harmful for their children to improve children's ability and grow up which demands independence,study hard and learn how to do something by themself. how do we solve this trouble?for one thing ,we can bulid up children's confidence so that children can do some mission by themself and courage children learn the shills of life and study which it can help me become more powerful in the future. for another ,we must tell their children that parents can't help them all the time ,because all parents will died in the future .only rely on themself ,them can get great achievement in society.last but noe least,we can use love to make children become more independent in society.i believe that use those ways can make children become more independent!
