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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags In past decades,the disposal bags have been allowed to widespread use.Not only used by clothes,vegetables,foods but also used by books,gifts... so,we can know it is very convenirnce to eyeryone.But it's also bring some problems. As follows:First,lt makes a huge pollutions,it can't for use again,so people often throw it everywhere.Second,due to our homeland,we should product it .use more disposal bags would make our city become dirty. For my point of views,i suggest we should limited the use of disposal bags.In order to product our homeland ,we have to process the green activity and against the throw something everywhere.so ,we can't often use the Plastic bags,it can bring some outcomes that we never relized.