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2008年12月英语四级作文真题:一次性塑料袋

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:15浏览次数:2650
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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags   
1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用   
2. 造成的问题   
3. 限制使用塑的意义
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全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,学术词汇的希望能更熟练一些;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags In past decades,the disposal bags have been allowed to widespread use.Not only used by clothes,vegetables,foods but also used by books,gifts... so,we can know it is very convenirnce to eyeryone.But it's also bring some problems. As follows:First,lt makes a huge pollutions,it can't for use again,so people often throw it everywhere.Second,due to our homeland,we should product it .use more disposal bags would make our city become dirty. For my point of views,i suggest we should limited the use of disposal bags.In order to product our homeland ,we have to process the green activity and against the throw something everywhere.so ,we can't often use the Plastic bags,it can bring some outcomes that we never relized.

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