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As is vividly shown in the picture, these two man sit on the bench complaining about other people's behaviors, one of them said,"the foreign cities are so clean." the other one replyed,"yes, these people are realy of low quality."and they throw rubbish on the ground. the most stricking feature that captures my attentions is, they do not aware of that acctually they are the ones who are really of low quality. As is revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that self-cognition profoundly indicates that team work is momentous and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.