从句使用很不错,再接再厉;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累。
As is vividly shown in the picture, these two men are sitting on the bench complaining about other people's behaviors, one of them said,"the foreign cities are so clean." the other one replied,"yes, these people are realy of low quality."and they throw rubbish on the ground. the most stricking feature that captures my attentions is, they do not aware of that acctually they are the ones who are really of low quality. As is revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that self-cognition profoundly indicates that team work is momentous and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.