2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文中较熟练地使用高级词汇，但词汇量仍需积累。

As is vividly shown in the picture, these two men are sitting on the bench complaining about other people's behaviors, one of them said,"the foreign cities are so clean." the other one replied,"yes, these people are really of low quality."and they throw rubbish on the ground. the most stricking feature that captures my attentions is, they do not aware of that acctually they are the ones who are really of low quality. As is revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that self-cognition profoundly indicates that team work is momentous and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.