语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇。
As is vividly shown in the picture, these two men are sitting on the bench grumbling about other people's behaviors, one of them said,"The foreign cities are so clean." the other one replied,"Yes, these people are really of low quality. "And they throw rubbish on the ground. the most stricking feature that captures my attention is, they do not realise that actually they are the ones who are really of low quality. As is revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that self-cognition profoundly indicates that team work is momentous and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.