2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词。

I have already six years not back town. In order to improving my study,which my parents and I back town. Some high building were built in the town. I walked in the road,which saw clean and beautiful road. Around the prinary school's road. I don't saw too many rubbishes than six years agoes