2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者高级词汇方面要多累积，词汇表达不够丰富；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。

I have already six years not back courty. In order to improve my study,which my parents bought a house in the city. Some high building set up in the couty. I walked in the road,which saw clean and beautiful road. Around the primary school's road, I don't saw too many rubbishes than six years ago