2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，但词汇表达丰富度不足；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。

I have already six years not back courty. In order to improve my study,which my parents bought a house in the city. Some high buildings set up in the couty. I walked in the road, which saw a clean and beautiful road. Around the primary school's road that I don't saw too many rubbishes than six years ago