作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
I have already six years not back country. In order to improve my study,which my parents purchase a house in the city. Some high buildings set up in the country. I walked in the road, which saw a clean and beautiful road. Around the primary school's road that I don't saw too many rubbishes than six years ago