2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；语言不流畅。

I have already six years not back country. In order to improve my study that my parents purchase a house in the city. Some high buildings set up in the country. I walked in the road, which saw a clean and beautiful road. Around the primary school's road that I don't watch too many rubbishes than six years ago