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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视。

用户练习作文:

the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication as we known,the use of internet has become more and more important in interpersonal communication.it has caused lots of impacts about it including the positive and neglative one. for one hand,it's true that interpersonal communication on the internet is more convenient,quick and has more colorful forms.it narrows the distance of people who far away from each other and enhance the friendship through communciation more directly.for another,it's not safe enough because people can communciation on the internet with anyone wheather they are strange or not.besides,it's too easy to express people's sincere feeling and many people are addicted to the use of internet so that they don't want to leave the internet to talk with people face to face. in my opinion,the internent is good for internet communication as long as people use it with proper manner and enough attention.

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