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the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication as we known,the use of internet has become more and more important in interpersonal communication.it has caused lots of impacts about it including the positive and neglative one. for one hand,it's true that interpersonal communication on the internet is more convenient,quick and has more colorful forms.it narrows the distance of people who far away from each other and enhance the friendship through communciation more directly.for another,it's not safe enough because people can communciation on the internet with anyone wheather they are strange or not.besides,it's too easy to express people's sincere feeling and many people are addicted to the use of internet so that they don't want to leave the internet to talk with people face to face. in my opinion,the internent is good for internet communication as long as people use it with proper manner and enough attention.
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