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作者用词生动多样，高级词汇使用比较准确，但有少数拼写错误；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
What is happiness? Many people want to find the most valuable things and then try to make good use of it.Pople need satisfaction such as flowers need water and fresh.Happiness is what essential emotion we pursue in life. There are many troublesome absent in life's aspect.What we really need do is to beat them and make a seat for pleasure.We can deal with unhappiy thing by communication with people who we are closely.It can release the mental pressure.Similarly,you can resort other ways to adress you trouble. It is universally acknowledged that problems are normal phenomenon ,so don not put youself to much in this positon,try to make life better and the first thing is try to make yourself relaxed.
