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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

It is universally acknowledged that the first impression is important.Because you can only get limited messages if you have no deep access to one stranger.Today I want to express my thoughts in the first impression. In one hands, it is have to admit the first you see one person you can evaluate fundamental elements about him by clothes,appearance and so on, but in other hands it is also admit that you can not realise his mental virtues.So when you judge a person you should evaluate comprehensively.Try to obtain more information and get long with them.It can make more objective judgement as far as I am concerned. so do not judge an apple by it's apperance it will do more harm than good ,and it is also unfair to the people you don't really know.

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