文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
It's unwise to conclude when you have just seem or listened something. Last sunday, on my way to school, I saw an old couple were arguing with a young boy. The lady was too sick to stand well. First sense of feeling, the boy must made something bad for the old lady. Some people around tried to make them stop arguing but failed. After 5 minutes' arguing,a police came and figured out the truth. The old couple want to bargain with the young boy about the taxi fee. The boy refused. Then what happened when we saw. If people helped the old couple before police came, there must make some mistake on it. So, it's unwise to do something before you get the truth.
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