2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者用词生动多样，高级词汇使用比较准确，但有少数拼写错误。

It is universally acknowledged that everyone should have the awareness of risk whether in society in life or you will face more unexpected challenges. As the saying goes:do not put all eggs in one basket which comprise the implication of risks.With the development of technological and economic what we can do are get accordance with it rather than put hubris to change the world.As college students we have no awareness about what the world will become after our graducate,so we should do is to get more transferable knowledge to enrich the essential elements about ourself.So we can be more comretitive in comprarison with other job seekers when finding dreamy occupation