作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
It's unwise to conclude matter when you have just seem or heard a part of the matter. Last sunday, on my way to school, I saw an old couple arguing with a young boy in front of a hospital. The lady was too sick to stand well. First sense of feeling, the boy must have made something bad for the old lady. Some people around tried to make them stop arguing but failed. After 5 minutes' arguing,a policeman came and figured out the truth. The old couple want to bargain with the young boy about the taxi fee. They were coming to hospital for the lady's serious health problem. So they want to save money as more as possible. The boy refused. Then we saw what happened next. If people helped the old couple before police came, there must would make some mistake on it. So, it's unwise to do something before you get the truth.
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