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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；应增加文中从句的使用；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，同时拼写错误稍多。
today,we are show a tendancy to judge a person by their appearance.but from my view of opinion,it is not a good thing to do that in a society ,because it is not a respecetful behavior,and of course ,it is not enough smart to give a judgement ,just becuase the appearance that could not change since birth .as the old saying :"the real beauty just shine in one's heart." a pretty girl would not be the real friend you actually need in trouble .by the way ,i have to clearify that judge a person by the attitude towards his apperance is reasonble,due to a responsible guy would never let him get in a embrassment situstion just because his dirty and grumpy dress . but everything is possible ,so ,keep your eyes on ,and feel someone in heart,not in your eyes.because the eyes would fool you ,but your heart would not .
